Thanks to Mama Hall, we have these poems that Tom wrote when he was in 6th grade. Who knew he was such a good little poem writer at such a young age and soooo romantic. :) Enjoy!
Pineaple Coconut Delight
By Tommy Hall
The lumpy, yellow, and white
delight will taste like nuts,
pineaples, and coconuts
it will smell fresh like pineaple
and coconut
you will hear crunches and
squishes and it will feel
lumpy soft and cold.
My First Kiss
by Tommy Hall
The moons alight the stars are bright
your hand touches mine,
our hearts and eyes meet, i feel the blood rush down to my
feet. Our lips lightly press, we both close our eyes.
Then when we awake to our
surprise. we've had the first kiss of our lives
True Love
By Tommy Hall
Her hair glimmers like diamonds
She wants something
She jumps and dances
Suddenly it dawns on him
He is in love
She hears a whisper
She asks, "Whose there".
He says "Don't mind me I won't bother you"
She says "Please bother me".
THIS IS ANOTHER VERSION OF THE LAST ONE...KEEP READING!
True Love
By Tommy Hall
he hair glimmers like diamonds
She wants something
She jumps and dances
Suddenly it dawns on him
He is in love
She hears a whisper
She asks "whose there"
He says "Its me i'm here my love"
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2 comments:
tom, thats so cute!!! good job. do we have any more coming?
Very impressive Tom. Even in 6th grade. Hey we have a job for your guys. Miles will email Tom with the info. He hasn't recieved it yet, I don't think.
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